Monday, June 27, 2011

My learning goal

My goal for this term is to make my writing more interesting sentences and my other goal is to stay focused . Hope you enjoy my movie.

1 comment:

  1. I hope you achieve your goal Rayden. Have you thought about writing about sports as I get the impression from your movie that you have a passion for it. Maybe writing about your own sports or sports you see on tv might help you with your writing more interesting sentences.

    Miss G :-)

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